Carrollton Creative Writers' Club


November 2007



Newsletter of the
Carrollton Creative Writers’ Club

Issue Number: 5      Publishers: ADP\LDG      Date: November 2007

The Carrollton Creative Writers Club is a support group of writers for writers.
Our mission: To provide information and critique, and to facilitate the art of all forms of
written expression.

Meetings at Carrollton Cultural Arts Center:
10:00 am – 12:00 pm, 2nd and 4th Tuesdays
6:00 pm – 8:00 pm 2nd and 4th Thursdays

Contact: Mary Wilburn 770-832-0575
Questions? Please email...


BUSINESS:
�� Diana Black is running full speed ahead assembling the first page of CCWC’s
web site. We should be able to take a peek at her progress sometime
between the months of hearts and ides.
We’ll be ooohing and aaahing in no time.

�� December 15th is the last day of the Christmas sale at the Carrollton Creative
Arts Center. December 17th is the last day to pick up your unsold items. (Or
else). Let’s once again recognize the efforts of our members that enabled our
participation in this sale. Thank you Richard Anderson, Diana Black,
Bev Bruemmer, Mary Cunningham, Joann Dunn, David Green, Mary Wilburn, and Denise Williams.

�� January begins a new year for our writers’ group, and the first time we will be
recognized as official by the Carrollton Creative Arts Center. Our dues
remain at $25 for the year and should be paid in January in order to continue
your group member benefits. Beverly Bruemmer or Dave Green (for the
evening group) can collect monies and give receipts.


FACILITOR:

2nd Tuesday of the Month Highlights:
�� Claire Baker facilitated our meetings this month. She invited the very
engaging author and playwright, Sybil Rosen to address our group. Sybil’s
novel, Speed Of Light won the Association of Jewish Libraries
Sydney Taylor Award. She took us through her writing, revising, and publishing process with
this novel and answered various questions regarding writing a play. This and
other works of Ms. Rosen’s have been published in multiple languages
worldwide. Thanks to Claire for such a fascinating guest.

2nd Thursday of the Month Highlights:
�� Only two of our evening members were present. They spent time working on
manuscript formatting using a word processor.

4th Tuesday of the Month Highlights:
�� Our group was small, but intimate this meeting. We had two new members
so Claire went over the functions of our club after we introduced ourselves
and shared some of our accomplishments.

4th Thursday of the Month Highlights:
�� Our group used this time to read current works aloud.
Upcoming Meeting Topics:
Upcoming Tuesday AM Highlights:
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Richard Anderson facilitates December’s meeting. There will be only one
meeting this month in lieu of the holidays.
�� Richard has arranged for a very special guest to address our group. Our
speaker at the December 11 meeting is Dr. Emily Hipchen, assistant
professor in the English Department at the West Georgia University. Emily
has taught and published numerous articles in all of her specialities which
include Creative Nonfiction, Autobiography and Memoir, Adoption Life Writing
and 18th/19th century British Literature. She also has published creative
writings in fiction, poetry, nonfiction and autobiography. She will speak to our
club on the art and craft of writing Creative Nonfiction with emphasis on
writing Memoir and Autobiography. Come and enjoy learning from Emily's
extensive experience and knowledge in writing and literature.

Upcoming Thursday PM Highlights:
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�� Dave Green will speak about the elevator pitch concept… Don’t know what it
is? You’ll have to come by to find out. (All evening members will be sworn to
absolute secrecy about this powerful topic.)

READINGS:
Tuesday Morning
�� Diana Black read her introduction for WOOF, a non-fiction work which she is
collaborating with Mary Cunningham and another author in Texas.
She transported us all to a more innocent, yet more responsible time
READER'S COMMENTS: It was wonderful to know the piece touched readers
emotions-in a positive way, and that the ending was satisfying since I KNOW
it was “dumb” before. It was also good to hear a passage could be made
clearer, therefore not causing the reader to stop to figure out what was being
referenced And to learn that changing a simple preposition can make all the
difference. Thanks to everyone who offered their opinions. What a great
opportunity to improve.

�� Zan Marie Stedham read an advanced chapter in her science fiction work
The Dawn and The Lion. We all enjoyed her progress with this novel.
READER'S COMMENTS: Once again I am amazed at the insight of our group.
The fact that my story is new to your eyes gives me a window into how
readers will respond. The need for more varied sensory detail and more
emotional content gives me a target as I continue to write.

Thursday Evening



CHECK YOUR CALENDARS:
Frame of Mind is hosting a book signing for Beverly Bruemmer, Joe Byrd, Mary
Cunningham, Joann Dunn, and Mary Wilburn. Diana Black’s artwork will also be
available at this event, December 8th and 9th Saturday, 10-5, Sunday, 12-5.

Brian Corrigan will host the Dahlonega seminar the second weekend of
February. This will be the last time he serves this function for this event, so catch
him if you can.

Mary Wilburn will be speaking in one of the break-out sessions along with
Norman Chastain for Murder Goes South. They will address the pitfalls and
paradoxes of getting published for the first time. Murder Goes South’s banquet is
on Friday evening January 25th and Mary will speak at the sessions on Saturday,
January 26th.


HELPFUL LINKS:
http://www.usu.edu/journalism/faculty/sweeney/resources/ap.htm
http://www.bu.edu/com/writingprgm/ap_styleguide1.pdf
www.ask.com
http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=124992397&blogID=3324

PERSONALS:
�� Congratulations to Richard Anderson. His story Trinkett’s Law, won third
place in the Byline Magazine New Talent Short Story Contest. The editor
commented, “. . . winners . . . started strong, sustained momentum and
carried the judge through to the end.” and, “. . . in a short piece there is no
room for flashbacks.” Richard commented that he had employed several
flashbacks, so they must have been smooth enough to satisfy the judges.

�� Joann Dunn has decided to start a blog. She considers this a practice blog
as it contains a little bit of everything. She plan to create another that is more
book related later. If readers leave comments, they then can leave links,
which helps expansion. Joann gives credit for her bold move to Mary
Cunningham. So let’s visit Joann’s blog site www.bloggisfugit.blogspot.com
and leave some comments for her, a couple of minutes to lend support for our
members helps our entire group.

Speaking of Mary Cunningham, we all need to visit her blog site
www.cynthiasattic.blogspot.com. She has been featuring talents such as
Heather Ingemar, author of A Slip Of Wormwood, and Kirby Larson with
Hattie Big Sky. She gets lonely when no one pops in to say hi, so please do.
Mary also shared a helpful site for a good marketing blog
http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=124992397&blogID=3324
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S.T.R.A.P.
Writer Submissions Take A Look Rejections Acceptances Pledge
Amber 6 1 3 10
David 18 1 12 12
Richard 2
Zan Marie 2

     



Anyone who would like to participate please submit your name and your pledge.
If we don’t submit . . . well, none of these others will happen. The more no’s we
get, the closer we are to publishing. So let us know. How many submissions do
you pledge to make in the next month, quarter, year, whatever.

WRITE, WRITE, WRITE...SUBMIT, SUBMIT, SUBMIT.


Happy writing fellow scribes.
See you next month.
Please be kind enough to
bring any incorrect data,
mistakes, or omissions to our
attention:
amber_pickle@msn.com
davidgreen@carrollcountyschools.com

Thank you for your patience if they exist in this issue.

PS. Sorry it's a bit late.
Dave's fault completely.
We will aim to send out
newsleters by the end of
the month for 2008!!!
Please be assured we
try our best.

If you like what you see,
let us know.
If you have suggestions,
we have a series of forms you'll need to
fill out before you can speak to a person.
If you don't like what you see,
it just like a submission...
We'll keep sending them until
someone puts a contract on us!

-Dave and Buster
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Carrollton, Georgia
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